In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for them is the countryside. Some people think its more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
Population increase over the span of time has resulted into an increased demand for residencies. To fulfil the requirement, the area of countryside is being utilized. Protection of the natural surroundings is more important than using it for residential purposes. I agree with the opinion that the preservation of nature is very crucial for the healthy lifestyle and atmosphere, while the residential buildings can be uilt in other available areas and by proper planning.
Climate of the world has been changing drastically over the last few decades due to the improper use of the countryside and unnecessary urbanization of the rural areas. Pollution has benn increased rapidly due to decrease in the amount of trees and natural reserves.For example, in Lahore to build the airport housing society , the green fileds were cut off and houses were built there. Many other housing societies were similarly build on the rural areas. This has resulted in smog and pollution ,bringing the city among the top polluted ones in the world.
Preserving and promoting the protection of countryside is critical for the atmosphere, moreover, it makes the area attractive and scenic.For example, in Islamabad . the greenery has been protected and promoted. Lush green fields along with lakes and streams keep the environment clean as well as make the city majestically beautiful. Taller buildings consisting of lats are being built that reduces the area requirement and provides larger number of residences. It improves the image of the country on international platforms as well as brings in tourism.
To sum up, I will pen down saying that no compromise should be made on protection of countryside. To cope up with the increasing requirement of residential places , new ideas like flats and combine villas should be imposed. The beauty and scenery of the rural sides should be protected and increased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24422442244 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95638226189 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8480260173 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161098318614 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501090492565 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037080701335 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895576321975 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294632991081 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.