These days due to the scarcity of space there has been a housing crunch and so, currently the only open spaces available for new construction, is in the countryside. While some opine that it is imperative to preserve the countryside and not construct new homes there, another school of thought have opposing view and believe construction is absolutely essential to eradicate housing problems. This essay shall express my opinion that countryside needs to be protected.
To begin with, due to the rapid increase in population, the demand for new homes will continue to rise. Building more houses because there is a demand, is not going to stabilize the situation. Furthermore, there is a dearth of open spaces in cities and the land available in countryside is our only access to fresh air and outdoor activities. For example, people from urban areas travel to the rural areas which, are comparatively quieter, to escape the stress and chaos of the city. Therefore, if open spaces are re-developed, man will have no place to de-stress.
Likewise, if the countryside is also turned into a concrete jungle, it will pose serious threats on our environment. There will be an imbalance in the ecosystem for, there will be an increase in pollution, lack of tress, drainage of natural resources, etc. Furthermore, most of out livelihood depends on the activities conducted in countryside. For instance, if farm lands are used for construction, there will be an acute shortage of food. As a result, compromising our open spaces to tackle housing problems will have serious repercussions.
In conclusion, is catering to new homes at the cost of open spaces advisable? Probably not! I believe, while the short term housing issues may be resolved, long term problems on the environment and quality of life is irrevocable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...posing view and believe construction is absolutely essential to eradicate housing problems. This ess...
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Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hile
...of open spaces advisable? Probably not! hile the short term housing issues may be re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 296.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10472972973 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98520020912 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0627285918 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25528875543 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783769159795 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627235438185 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152057016468 0.162205337803 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822398517793 0.0443174109184 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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