In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
Overall population growth increased 100 times in last decade in urban area than rural because of job opportunities, better education system and well-equipped hospitals. Due to growing population, new flats and houses are needed in many locations inside the cities but space to build a house is only available in countryside. However, some people say it is essential to safe the countryside by not building the new homes.
Over the decade due to centralization most of the cities in India are over populated that shows the adverse effect of less space availability in urban zone. There are people who like to live in a self-owned personal house since due to lack of land and unlikeness to stay in an apartment background they prefer to move out of cities. Additionally, many international companies shown interests to set up their offices and factories in upcoming townships, also this will offer work to their locals. Several people believe buying a house in cities will cost an arm and leg than investing in countryside.
On the other hand, some people believe especially farmers and agriculture social activist protest outsiders to buy a land in villages. People apart from their region can influence and bring new modern culture might affect the traditional rules is one of the inevitable belief registered among rural people mind. For instance, many villager’s in India believe new year celebration is not part of their culture but it has influenced many youngster’s these days. Secondly many NGO had done surveys on local people and results shows that 70% of people say buying land in village will destroy farming.
To close, to build a good infrastructure it is important to move people to countryside also it is vital to protect the countryside values.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11340206186 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95527051813 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0669935706 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263874555129 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970280677932 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769747803132 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164550407593 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570431081648 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.