In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building is in the countryside, some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not to build new homes there .
What is your opinion?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience
Nowadays ,homes are indispensable in our countries. However, some individuals think that protecting the rural areas is more significant than using them to build new houses. I personally believe that to build these areas much better.Because it will decrease the crowded ,and the congestion in the downtown. In this essay, both points of view will be presented with examples ,and my opinion will be provided.
To begin with, in certain countries new buildings are required to minimize population increases in downtown. For example, in Egypt as it is one of the biggest country around the world.There are approximately 90 Million of people which need flats, house ,and homes to protect them ,and their life from living in the streets. The government starts to use most of dessert to build new cities which includes new homes , hospitals, educational schools.Thus, to use the country sides is good to reduce population density.
Nevertheless, most people are preferring to protect the rural areas from building, and keep them to maintain the shape of the state. Such as, UAE when they used their rural areas in the Green Belt all around the country to protect it from the dust , and storms. However, each government should choose which is better to their country depend on the weather , and the population.
To conclude, I would like to restate my opinion that I totally agree with the latter opinion, which is using the countrysides to help people to live better lifestyle. Moreover, I recommend that government should publish awareness through social media .Such as Facebook, Twitter, and use TV to enrich people’s information about remote area, ways to maintain them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81275489203 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9607853826 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19136933076 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709022747483 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516380443183 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110651371377 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649214065352 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.