In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
In past few decades because of massive urbanisation in metropolitan cities they have become hugely crowded and their is awful shortage of land for residence and one of the alternatives being suggested is to move towards countryside. Members of the public speculate that this notion should not be promoted as it necessary to maintain the status of the latter. I agree to this view but up-to a certain extent as it is undeniable for housing problem in rest places.
The first point worth mentioning is that making homes in the countryside would diminish the natural beauty, fresh air which are integral part of that ecosystem. The most drastic consequences are caused by infrastructure that essentially follows any human settlement – that’s, roads, power lines, means of water supply, and such. The construction of these engineering comes results in the destruction of natural biomes of ponds, rivers, and forests, causing many animals to migrate or go extinct. So as the population would start moving in close proximity to countryside; gradually overtime it would in-fact become into a busy city itself full of city-dwellers polluting the neighborhood. Thus having no movement between cities and countryside will have its own set of benefits which cannot be overlooked.
On the other hand it is well known fact that metro-cities today have residential issues. As the cities population grew and further land got acquired. This lead to rise in prices of houses to an unprecedented height because of the land shortage. As an alternative, it has become a necessity to live where property space is available. Another key-point to emphasize is that this movement can help prosper the countryside into thriving business center and as a consequence of this relocation would provide viable income source.
In conclusion, it would be ridiculous to argue that their is no housing issue. Whilst, before moving to countryside government should intervene and have proper guidelines defined for residential homes. So that the uniqueness, natural beauty of countryside remains intact.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...as the population would start moving in close proximity to countryside; gradually overtime it w...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so, thus, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98498846003 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.491160827 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0727801609882 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223306549939 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217464978816 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441030965746 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131118903299 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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