In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
It is obvious that big cities are overcrowded and a place for the new buildings is also not available. Some people argued that space available in the village area should be used to address this issue while others believed that it should be protected instead. This essay agrees with the former statement because the remote areas also need to develop and the problem of overpopulation can be addressed through this.
People of villages are not getting equal opportunities as city people due to the underdevelopment of the area. An increasing number of remote areas people are migrating to the city on a daily basis for better opportunities and for better facilities. It can be addressed only if we will develop the countryside properly. Result in overall economic growth and development of the county as a whole. One of the recent studies concluded that countryside people are dissatisfied with the current level of facilities they have and they want to move to bigger cities.
Another reason why underdeveloped areas should also be developed is to address the problem of overpopulation in major cities. Every day cities are becoming overcrowded, due to this price of accommodation is skyrocketing day by day on account of increased demand. Equal distribution of the population is required to solve this problem, and it can be achieved through building new houses in villages. People start to move to villages once there are more facilities to use.
In conclusion, building new houses in the countryside is necessary to address the problem of space constraints in the cities because it provides more opportunities for people who live there and it solved the problem of the increased population of large towns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12455516014 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00989784914 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498220640569 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4305151005 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232469612989 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828138218273 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631688990495 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1541667777 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495613143781 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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