In many places women are taking jobs which are traditionally
Done by men. What do you think make these changes happen? What’s your opinion about it?
The dynamics of the working environment has been changed dramatically around the world. Women are having equal opportunities with the enhancement of gender equality in different workplaces. I personally believe that it is fair enough to empower human beings regardless of their gender.
With the advent of groundbreaking digitalized technologies, now boundaries of work are endless. Women can present their skills and capabilities to employers all around the world online unlike the past couple of decades back when that was difficult to reach out to the owner of the businesses directly. That is how females can secure the jobs by showing their skills in the area of work where men were dominant previously. A rather illustrative example is the LinkedIn social media platform which allows men and women to make portfolios of their careers. Employers and recruiters can find out the best match for the role which provides equal chances for women to perform any job worldwide.
This change is an integral part of social evolution in my opinion. Many challenges such as a drastic increase in population, inflation, scarcity of resources, and social and economic crisis are continuously making our world vulnerable. Therefore, the contribution of women will help to ameliorate society as a whole. For instance, husband and wife will have the same esteem for both and men will recognize the abilities of women which will ultimately help them to deal the domestic challenges in a more confident way and the financial load will also be divided. Overall, it will add value to society.
The conclusion to be drawn is that nowadays women can present their capabilities to the owners and employers of the companies through a digital world that provide them equal chances to perform the different role of men in workplaces. I opine that many current challenges of the world can be tackled by recognizing the abilities of women at work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gnizing the abilities of women at work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14603174603 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88221101546 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4521076514 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132159417771 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447982580186 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318563662488 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759986793521 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260621967903 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.