Many schools today require students to work without pay for companies as part of their education.
Is this more advantageous to students or companies?
Nowadays, almost in all schools students are require to work for unpaid internships for many companies as part of their education. Although companies will get benefits, but students will get more advantages from unpaid internships.
On the one hand, companies will get an extra employee without giving salary. The most important cost that is increasing to run a business is the cost of employees. Students that are willing to work for free in order to gain experience, companies can cover their recurring cost. Moreover, workload will also reduced among current staffs. For example working in a Walmart, students can learn stocking the shelves, packaging the items, and even handling cash counters, such work require very less training and because of this companies can save a few amount of money as well.
Nonetheless, students will get a host of benefits while working as an intern. Though students will not get any payment for their hard work, however, they will acquire an important management skills like working in a team, organization, maintaining work-life balance and an experience in working in corporate environment. Additionally, companies prefer to hire the same intern instead of hiring a new employee, with this students can get a permanent job in the same company since they are experience resources. Moreover, students will get in contact with more senior level of employees and they can guide them in their career, for example whether students should go for higher studies or experience in the field is more vital.
In conclusion, companies and students will both get benefits, however, I believe, students will get more advantages in the long run since they will learn vital skills that will aid them in building their career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...ays, almost in all schools students are require to work for unpaid internships for many...
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Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...ost in all schools students are require to work for unpaid internships for many compani...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...ring cost. Moreover, workload will also reduced among current staffs. For example worki...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to stock'.
Suggestion: to stock
...orking in a Walmart, students can learn stocking the shelves, packaging the items, and e...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...quire very less training and because of this companies can save a few amount of mone...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'few amounts'.
Suggestion: few amounts
...nd because of this companies can save a few amount of money as well. Nonetheless, stude...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... instead of hiring a new employee, with this students can get a permanent job in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20141342756 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71356006168 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0279296965 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400332486933 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169140066976 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114699072533 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288238581473 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965598508319 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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