Many wear like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
It is human nature to want to be different, and to stand-out in a crowd, rather than blending in. Because of this, people prefer to wear fashionable clothes. While I view this as mostly a favorable thing, I believe that are some downsides to be wary of. In this essay, I will discuss both the positive and negative effects of this trend.
In my opinion, it is perfectly normal for people to prefer wearing fashionable clothes, as it is a medium of expression at a sub-conscious level. How a person chooses to dress-up himself/herself is a reflection of the person's personality. Fashionable clothes help people to express themselves. For example, an artist might prefer to choose clothes with vivid colors. Additionally, wearing stylish clothes also promotes the mixing of diverse cultures. Since fashionable clothes are often designed by combining themes that usually span across cultural boundaries, it also helps to encourage creativity and tolerance of foreign cultures. The world would be monotonous and boring without the popularity of fashionable clothes. Moreover, the demand for stylish clothes also fuels the economy by creating jobs in various sectors.
On the other hand, the are some adverse effects of the popularity of fashionable clothes. Firstly, with the popularity of fashionable clothes, there is an increasing trend to buy clothes that are ridiculous and impractical. People, mainly the younger generation, is influenced by TV advertisements and celebrity endorsements to buy clothes that are neither good-looking nor practical. Secondly, the fashion industry is very fast-paced, due to which clothes might become out of date in a week. Furthermore, the fashion industry invents trends to trick people into buying more clothes. One clear example is the latest trend of layered clothes, which involves wearing a lot of thin layers instead of wearing one thicker layer. Not only does this result in naïve people wasting their money, but it also produces a lot of waste, which is harmful to the environment.
In conclusion, although wearing trendy clothes is generally a good thing, people should think thoroughly before blindly following this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... himself/herself is a reflection of the persons personality. Fashionable clothes help p...
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...various sectors. On the other hand, the are some adverse effects of the popu...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rious sectors. On the other hand, the are some adverse effects of the popularity ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35755813953 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95595369549 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7405912811 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.15 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26702573937 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819857817303 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827586805725 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193375887101 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073431166865 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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