Health is the most important factor in anyone's life. It should get the first priority always. But in today's work stress environment it is not possible to get any kind of physical workout because of the job commitments. As a result many people are suffering from health related problems and dies at a young age. I will discuss the reasons ahead in this with further elaboration.
In this modern era work is more mental and thinking related. Employees like to spend almost 8 hours in a single chair at an office and sometimes even skip lunch due to the pressure of timely completion of their duties. This is somehow affecting their body and destroying their longevity. As, these workers will be so tired that they won't be able to exercise or even imagine doing it.
I belief that not only working hours but the kind of food intake they have is also a reason for less motivation to squeeze a jog. Nowadays an employee is so busy that he eats whatever he can get ready easily without wasting any single minute and hazzle of cooking. This type of thinking is today ruining the society as nearly all working officials are either obese or less energetic and even some are heavy drinkers. Social life is get neglected everyday with no time for family or friends as the will to earn money is like a monster which has taken control over a person's senses.
Reports published in all health surveys are shocking as it is seen that 7 out of 10 job professionals are going to not make it till their 50s. The reasons are worrying as they are either going to suffer from a heart attack, diabetes, stroke or depression. Although there are chances for recovery but it still a far cry.
I think any kind of physical activity or exercise should be made mandatory in workplaces. A special gym should be set up by the MNCs for the well-being of their hard-working staff as a token of appreciation. Government should encourage running and jogging as an activity like organising a sports marathon every weekends because at that time all the big companies are closed so much more people will be available for this event. It will increase a sense of togetherness and health awareness.
In the end, job is important for anybody because of the tough work culture and needs to support family but health should not be taken for granted and neglected as at the end if one ignores his health then someday health will also leave and no one will be there to take care. Physical exercise and walking should be a priority..
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... life. It should get the first priority always. But in todays work stress environment ...
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Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: BELIEF_BELIEVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believe' (verb) instead of belief (noun)?
Suggestion: believe
...o exercise or even imagine doing it. I belief that not only working hours but the kin...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... drinkers. Social life is get neglected everyday with no time for family or friends as t...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ogging as an activity like organising a sports marathon every weekends because at that...
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Line 6, column 325, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...xercise and walking should be a priority..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, then, well, even so, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 445.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49789811907 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8015975797 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0454545455 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77272727273 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284754832324 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729893489578 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043637801339 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13840674251 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553611827401 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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