Mass media has been impacting society and individuals for a long time. From my point of view, the news and the views presented by media certainly affect our society.
For instance, countless products are being advertised by media in the form of newspaper, television, and radio which may help consumers while deciding upon a product, which has more appealing qualities. Additionally, the elections of government in several countries are greatly influenced by media, it helps in presenting agenda, facts, and views of politicians which motivates voters to elect their candidates and form a government. Also, it has been widely seen, media provides people with information about other cultures and countries the political and cultural development about other countries and contributes to the globalization. Furthermore, the media also promotes entertainment among people, they learn about movies, cultural shows, and numerous medium of entertainment through media.
However, media can also be misleading by presenting incorrect information about products and merchandise, it can affect the market greatly. Further, the media can be biased as well, for example, in America NewsChannel CNN always supports Democratic party, while Fox channel always favors the Republicans, which is entirely based upon their preferences and political agendas. Moreover, the media often tend to spread religious and communal propaganda among the people through their medium and they follow them blindly, which results in unnecessary fear and unrest in society.
To recapitulate, media provide a ton of information which can be beneficial if interpreted wisely. Certainly, the media impact our lives in a more positive way than the negative, if the source of news is verified and unbiased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...edia impact our lives more positive way then the negative, if the source of news is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65789473684 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96794690015 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3426591099 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.818181818 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114009573034 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472425060604 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023837570104 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704520002442 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245970836841 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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