There are some actions need to be taken by govt to developing the road protection by minimizing the speed levels on the roads, on the other hand there are more better options which can bring down the accidents. Although both views are worth consideration, nonetheless, I support the latter approach and intend to discuss each side in subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly some people believe that by adding the speed border limit for cars, heavy vehicles like trucks and lorries can reduce the accidents on the roads. As some times the vehicles unable to control the speed while turning and narrow roads will lead the driver to loss the grip on the vehicle which may lead to an accident.
Secondly some people think that by splitting the ways based on vehicle type may help for example like heavy truck and lorry can go on the left side of the road cars and mini buses can go right side of the road in between can give some space for emergency vehicles like ambulances. In addition to this by adding the frequent signals in the heavy traffic roads can help in strengthen the road safety.
Coming to opinion I agree for both the ways in addition to that govt can allocate the special force or police to keep their eye on these activities in terms of adding fines for the violated people. Of course point 1 should be taken care by Govt in another hand need to allocate monitoring people on these jobs which may control the individuals.
- Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to your family party In your letter Explain why you are organizing the party Describe what you are planning to do Say how important it is to have your friend at the party 73
- Measures have been put in place to improve road safety by reducing speed limits Some people believe there are better alternatives Discuss both views and give your opinion 58
- Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to your family party In your letter Explain why you are organizing the party Describe what you are planning to do Say how important it is to have your friend at the party 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
... the roads, on the other hand there are more better options which can bring down the accide...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mit for cars, heavy vehicles like trucks and lorries can reduce the accidents on ...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ad cars and mini buses can go right side of the road in between can give some spa...
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Line 9, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g people on these jobs which may control the individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in addition, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6811023622 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32955453975 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.984372456 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.625 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.375 7.06120827912 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185872936224 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817945295656 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420593753227 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111059078947 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420405974724 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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