Mobile phones have become a necessary gadget for youngsters these days due to numerous uses it serves. In this essay I am going to discuss its pros and cons in accordance with my opinion.
21st century is a century of technology, mobile phone is an important invention that has drastically changed the way communication is used to be done earlier. Among the various benefits, first and foremost, it is a portable device which can be used to communicate with anybody arround the world at any place and at any time. So, it helps the person in emergency situations such as need a roadside assistance at remote place, or medical advice from family doctor on a holiday trip. Secondly, with internet connectivity it has become a one solution for many problems. Dictionary has been replaced with google search, newspaper with google news and watch with mobile timer. Thirdly, with social media applications on mobile phone, one can remain in contact with his friends, former colleagues and relatives. So, it has broken the international boundaries and bring the world closer.
On the flip side, it has deprived people from family time as each and everyone is engaged in their respective phones. Family talks have been replaced with chats, it has made inroads to the dinning table, usually dinner is used to be the ideal time for the family to discuss their mutual concerns. Further, it has decreased the memory power of younger generation as everything is being stored in the phone memory they do not feel the neccesity to remember things. Calculations which were earlier done manually is now being performed on calculator application. Last but not least, it has adverse effect on the eye sight of the users. Medical research has further proved that habitual users are on verge of loosing half of their sight by the age of 30.
In conclusion, mobile phone is a gift of technology to human beings, so we must learn to make best use of it. We must concentrate on its utilisations and eliminate its bad impact on human race. Then only its objective can be obtained.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 609, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...not least, it has adverse effect on the eye sight of the users. Medical research has furt...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
...gy to human beings, so we must learn to make best use of it. We must concentrate on its u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86647727273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66133446291 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6452331677 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158376747863 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446205260413 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495810420622 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989087603386 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492047545115 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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