Music is inseparable part of life, every occasions from happiness to sorrow are imitiated through it. Being the part of learning process and its utility in it is a subject of debate. I have a view that it helps and catalyse the learning process. In this essay, I will give views in favour through my objectivity in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, music is referred to as language of soul due to the soothing effect it have on our mental senses. Most of the people like to listen it in condition of stress as well as tiredness. It has numerous benefit in learning process. First and foremost, rhythm of music help in memorising the matter, for example, it is often observed that poems are learned easily as compared to essay as they have a musical rhythm. Secondly, children goes through lot of stress due to homework, examinations as well as assignments, they need something to come out of this stressful enviorment so that they can analyse their work and formulate their timetable of self study. Here, in such conditions music has an important role to play, it break the chain of disturbing thoughts and freshen up their mind. Generally, student who listen to music after school tends to perform better in studies than student who don't.
Apart from this music have numerous other advantages, classical music listeners have better concentration power. Mostly, chess player are regular listeners to this music. Consequently, few schools started classical music classes in the school to empower the concentration of their students. Moreover, music build the confidence, shy students who do not mix up with others and feel neglected in society get impetus through music. They try to express through it and motivate themselves.
In conclusion, music has numerous advantages in the life of children. They should be encouraged to take music classes so that they can make the best use of it. Music is a gift of nature so it should be enjoyed and cherished.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93072289157 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70503225877 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563253012048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5425668213 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1578947368 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180933083013 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617024981474 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512943059771 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115214264878 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144449364001 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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