Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many
children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as
children did in the past.
Do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words
In recent years life has become too busy for parents. Specifically, for families the pressure of earning a decent livelihood has dramatically increased so much so that they are not able to spend time with kids.
I tend to agree with argument that parents are not able to pay as much as attention as needed and in this essay I will discuss reason for being so.
Earlier in twentieth century women mostly where inside home working daily house chores and taking care of kids while men were working out and earning money for the family. Therefore, children had atleast one parent to take care of and spend time with. Whereas, starting late twentieth century majority of parents have started working long hours outside the home and hence have far lesser time than there previous generation to engage with their children.
Nowadays kids also started early to go school for getting education and find their way. In context to that children spent more time at school than at home, so its quite natural that they stay more with there teachers than parents. For example, in recent years more and more data have surfaced which shows that students spend more time for school tuition and extra-curricular activities at school. However, kids should not feel completely neglected by their parents. It should be taken as a priority by parents to be more involved in their kids.
In conclusion we can say that it is becoming harder and harder for parents to be involved with their kids because of the modern era. However, in my opinion its important for them to take active participation with spending time with their kids.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
In recent years life has become too busy for parents. S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86594202899 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40080184655 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5151393701 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227928644279 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879763506559 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037082153058 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12852453082 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273077947588 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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