In recent years, modern technology has improved to overcome the existing flaws and replace the use of old technical things. As a result, the world has been changing to adopt new technological features. Although recent technology facilitates people to use technologies efficiently, it has some drawbacks which affect the culture and environment. This essay describes the benefits and negative impacts of modern technology over the year. I agree that contemporary technologies build the economy of the nation into the next level whilst it devotes some impacts and influences people in a negative direction.
On the one hand, technology improvisation has been evolving and changing the world over the past 10 years. Significantly, the communication system plays a vital role in culminating the nation's technology evidence to the top. As a result, people's usage of those technical systems growing immensely. The devices such as Mobile, Internet calling and Pager. Besides communication systems, there are other things which ruled the people in recent years such as social networking. To exemplify, according to the survey 2019 which is unveiled by the Internet Service Provider of Where most people spending their leisure time in terms of technical, as per statistics, 97.3% of people use the social app called Facebook.
On the flip side, most people addicted to technology and spending most of their time to chat with other people, surfing on the internet, posting personal pictures and tweeting. Especially the school students who have been studying occupied by this technical stuff. As a consequence, students do not concentrate on their study and failed their exams is created the major impact in society. For instance, in olden days, people tend to spend time on with friends and neighbors. but now most people even sending invitations for their wedding through communication applications.
In conclusion, the effective features of current technologies construct people to improve their knowledge immensely. But it has certain implications affects people's culture, tradition and most prominently their time. Henceforward, the government has to disseminate awareness programs to people to contain the use of technologies in the correct direction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Suggestion:
...ple use the social app called Facebook. On the flip side, most people addicted t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...end time on with friends and neighbors. but now most people even sending invitation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54782608696 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01408860167 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56231884058 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2135174017 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.736842105 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183278284381 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605545389846 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303974693339 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111761493291 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400836964643 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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