In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work, and communicate online without any face-to-face contact with other people. Does it have a positive or negative development?
After the dawn of science and technology, in this contemporary era, people have been started spending more time on the internet and found a way to do all activities by sitting at home. Many shopping stores, companies, and social media have seen a massive increase in users. In this essay, I shall discuss the positive side as well as the downside of it.
The main reason for online activities is time-saving. Internet and computer became a basic necessity for every human being in this technological world. Masses have found it an easier and faster way to do shopping, attend meetings related to work, as well as contact loved ones on social media without seeing each other live. Additionally, another beneficiary point is that on the internet we could have varieties at any shops, however, this is not possible at the store in malls. Amazon, for the instance, for anyone who is in need of shoes could easily find many choices from sizes to colors and different brands. Recently, a survey has been done in the USA and the result was out of expectation, online shopping has enormously ramified by 20% compared to last year.
On the other side, in some circumstances online ordered item arrives late than expected delivery time, moreover, a damaged product on some occasions. Internet could be harmful to kids if not controlled by the parents. Some work-related issues, however, could not be resolved over the computer, and for that employees have to be there at the company physically. Online communication can not teach anything to youth regarding skill development. Body language could be learned only if we do a conversation in front of another person.
to put it in a nutshell, online technology has proven an outstanding part of our routine life. There are uncountable benefits of it, but proper guidance and supervision might lessen the negative impact on our society. As technology has played an indispensable role in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...rsation in front of another person. to put it in a nutshell, online technology...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sen the negative impact on our society. As technology has played an indispensable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97846153846 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80103784654 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609230769231 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9338553457 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1764705882 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161918072342 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430836655251 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322559563191 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834102696397 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372730462876 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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