Money should be spent on creating new public buildings, such as museums and town halls, rather than renovating existing ones. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
it is being believed that authorities should spend on the construction of new public places in the place of repair the old ones. I do not support this view because it will effect our budget and environment also. In the following paragraphs, supportive facts of my thought will be described.
Renovation is a less expensive activity as compared with build new structure, because in this process only the required things will be replaced with modern or in trend stuff. other things will remain the same and the funds will be saved for another essential development of the country. Moreover, ancient buildings are our legacy like assets of our elders, which can be shown to our coming generation to prove the existence of technology and theme in earlier time like Taj Mahal, Red Fort, Jama Masjid, Chandani Chowk and so on.
On the opposite side for constructing new empire it will demand land, which is not available due to high rate of population. if this will come in practice then available forests will be abolished to create place for that particular building. Consequently, it will affect on the environment and the number of patients related to breathing system will increase. For example, people with asthma had been recorded around 25% in 2012 due to making the broad highways it will raise up to about by 55% if more trees will cut down.
Conclusively, making novel architecture will spoil our economy's budget and it will also deprived the other sectors from development. With maintain the aged structures, nation can take step to improve more infrastructures and contribute towards securing the existing flora and fauna.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02573529412 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73922225453 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.064352155 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963166313371 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394474480205 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358328254619 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063599545359 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039910018934 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.