More and more children are using Mobile phones. Some people think it is good and some think it is bad thing? What is your opinion?
Technology is more unconventional and is growing hastily. Almost everyone uses mobile devices, laptops, printers, etc. to complete the daily tasks which is increasing their dependency on the modern technology. Children are also influenced with the latest technology and started using mobile phones for everything. In this essay we will discuss about the positive or negative impact of using mobile phones by children along with the arguments based on the facts.
Mobile devices, these days becoming the fundamental need of human life. Children also comes in this category as the use of mobile phones has been increased by them as well. Mobile phones play a crucial part from the school days as all important information which is required by an individual is available via software approach as well as it presents knowledge interestingly, which helps to grab information faster than other sources like books. Mobile phones these days are also emerging, it not only gives a user interface to operate, but also has given access to internet which enables it to connect to different parts of the world. It also helps one to build social relationship or making acquaintances because there are many applications such as facebook, snapchat, etc. which makes it possible.
Whereas, on the other hand, mobile phones have some bad impact on children. As discussed mobile phones has internet access which helps connecting to different webpages and information, it also unbolts the gate to some inappropriate webpages which create negative impact on children. They may learn something which is not good for them or not required for them to know. For Instance, during 2018, there was a game application named "Blue Whale" influenced many children to attempt suicide.
At the end I would conclude this as, mobile phone is a great discovery, though is a curse at the same time. It has positive as well as negative impact on children. In my opinion, use of mobile phones should be allowed to children but it should be under supervision of their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to connect' or 'connect'.
Suggestion: to connect; connect
... phones has internet access which helps connecting to different webpages and information, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16167664671 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76483997048 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547904191617 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4205559477 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171279053683 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596471135846 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514603703558 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110814991821 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036670340779 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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