Some employers believe that job applicants' social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In modern society, qualification has given utmost importance. Any person who is willing to apply for a job should be qualified enough to handle job responsibilities. Whereas on the other hand, social skills are also play a crucial role in one’s career. In this essay we discuss the arguments on academic qualification over social skills.
Today’s world is modern, and technology is advanced too, and this flourishing growth of technology also increases the need of people who understand the new tools and techniques. academic qualification is required to get deep knowledge of these because a literate person with qualification degrees will have better understanding of technology than an illiterate person. Moreover, it is quite practical, personal with good qualification will help the organization in a better way to grow and establish their business.
On the other hand, social skills also plays vital role as it creates those ideas from an individual which doesn’t persist in a person with academic- qualification. For instance, a recent study presented by BBC shows people who have more social skills are proved to be profitable for an organization because they found to be more innovative.
In my Opinion, when it comes to argue on academic-qualification or social skills which one is better, I would say a person should pertain both attributes. it is necessary to attain academic-qualification to understand the fundamental laws of life. Hence, Once should have academic qualification as well as focus on attaining social skills for better opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4512195122 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5160251813 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589430894309 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2909072181 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180413431159 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698677049661 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345727272211 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115403678774 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211644356935 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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