More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive development or negative?
Opinions are divided on whether the increasing need of wearing trendy clothes is a positive or negative development. I believe that the latter is the case, and wearing such clothes is more of a luxury than a necessity.
Although it is widely held belief that fashionable style of dress is essential to keep oneself up with the Joneses, in practice, this is not always the case. Evidence for this can be seen in the fact that people spend a lot of money buying these expensive designer clothes. Even after knowing the fact that the trend of such clothes keeps on changing, and purchasing these may cost a fortune to a middle-class family, they squander their hard-earned money over this and they may sometimes run into debts. This could also have adverse effects on children's minds. The effect of which could be easily identified by their increased inclination towards what to wear instead of focusing on studies. Therefore, spending on such clothes does not have long-term benefits, and not everyone would prefer to buy these.
In fact, far from being important to carry trendy garments, this is a negative trend for the reasons related to acceptability and comfortability. With regard to the former, such trendy clothes are not widely accepted, especially at most religious places as well as at work. The one wearing such clothes would be strictly prohibited from entering such places. As far as comfortability is concerned, such designer clothes are specifically tailored to meet the demands of celebrities for a special occasion, and wearing such clothes on daily basis by the common man is not comfortable. For these reasons, the attitude to give so much importance to wear fashionable clothes should be considered negative as most prefer to avoid wearing those.
In conclusion, instead of being the need, such designer clothes are part of a luxurious lifestyle. Having said that, the proposition of increasing importance to wear fashionable clothes is a negative development as it is not suitable for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09939759036 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85580769848 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539156626506 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1474620918 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402579328864 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138250631798 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105038619535 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278913631968 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910567992661 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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