It is true that, in this contemporary era, sales of fashionable clothes are being escalated at an unprecedented rate. However, an increasing number of people introspect that it is indispensable to wear only trendy attires. According to my perspective, it has enormous of negative effect.
To commence with, most of the people have no money for purchasing high amount of clothes in their day to day life especially middle class people which hurt alot. Another reason could be, sizeable majority of individuals prefer to waste their time on selecting some branded clothes on some online apps which harms their eyes. Thirdly, it also impacts our traditional culture. Moreover, in past time, elders used to say wear full clothes rather than half like, kurta pajama. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that only 38% people are following their own traditional clothes. Additionally, it is still decreasing day by day.
Looking on the other views, since the rate of fashionable attires have rosen, people are curious to wear new clothes in their life. First and foremost, it helps to keep society updated with modern world. Secondly, whenever people wear some good clothes and go here and there they feel comfortable and it enhance their personality as well as confidence level. Thirdly, we can easily adapt any culture or take some knowledge about their countries through clothes.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, new fashion and clothes are being launched these days in the markets. Eventually, these things are best because we want to stay updated yet, we must understand that we have our own traditional clothes and we should follow our culture too because we cannot leave our culture for getting new things in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...s our traditional culture. Moreover, in past time, elders used to say wear full clothes r...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
... and there they feel comfortable and it enhance their personality as well as confidence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10801393728 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69451770185 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7599106735 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214617926974 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734845855836 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641810827184 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139968998147 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056195147669 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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