One of the most contemporary issues that receive concerns from various parts of the world is the significant development in urbanization. There has been an increasing number of people who move to urban areas to seek a better living standard; however life in these cities often brings to inhabitants various hardship situations. The following paragraphs would analyzed some problems with some plausible solutions being indicated to tackle this phenomenon.
It can be undeniable that a large number of migrants travelling to cities could be confronted with different tough situations. To begin with, the cost of living exerts considerable pressure on new inhabitants. Particularly, it is the fact that expenditures spent on daily needs including transports, housing, or gas in a metropolis area are much higher than those in a countryside or small village. Moreover, people travelling from the countryside to economic centres could provoke some public disorders which would be related to the high rate of crimes and poverty. Furthermore, citizens would face environmental degradation which often occurs in most metropolitan areas. Take the polluted air issue as an example, the emission of numerous industrial factories or transports could damage the air quality which may be related to some severe diseases. Another obstacle is a lack of job opportunities due to the overwhelmed migrants, posing a threat to social welfare.
To avoid this problem worsening, some reasonable steps should be implemented. Firstly, it is highly desirable that governments should invest financial funds in the building of affordable or social housing to reduce the cost of living. Secondly, it would be a worthwhile idea if politicians launch a vehicle control policy to put a curb on traffic congestion around city centres. Thirdly, it is beneficial for authorities to establish industrial factories, and businesses in suburban areas instead of urban regions, helping the suitable labour resources between the countryside and the big cities.
In conclusion, migrants from underdeveloped regions to developed areas would encounter several hazzard circumstances which require immediate attention. Only when the government and local authorities make concerted efforts could this problem be efficiently handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'analyze'
Suggestion: analyze
...uations. The following paragraphs would analyzed some problems with some plausible solut...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...henomenon. It can be undeniable that a large number of migrants travelling to cities could be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66086956522 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1231988298 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2728689805 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0625 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180793262125 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488874186105 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575731500947 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100800258765 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479721346359 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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