More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative?
It is true that there have been an increasing number of people wearing stylish clothes with a view to pursuing fashion. There are several factors contributing to this trend, which have various negative influences on people’s lives.
The foremost reason for this trend involves individuals’ adequate financial capacity which derives from the thriving economy. With an abundance of money being left over, after covering basic needs such as food, education and medical care, many people choose to equip themselves with better and more fashionable clothes. Another important factor is the urge of many adults to be more attractive and unique than others. This must involve wearing clothes with novel designs, allowing people, especially young adults to vividly display their distinct characteristics.
Despite the high demand for fashionable garments bringing incentives to the economic development of a society, the negative effects of ceaselessly catching up with the newest fashion trend on people’s lives are numerous. One of which is that the considerable amount of money some people spend on luxurious and stylish garments has made them suffer from financial deficits. It is often the case that a person ends up working excessively long hours in order to cover their huge expenses on clothing. In addition, people in pursuit of fashion are easily encouraged to be greedy and materialistic because they may find it difficult to give up the happiness resulting from satisfying their material needs. Simply, People get addicted to instant gratification. This could in turn make these people develop a sense of alienation as they tend to value material items more than meaningful relationships between people, leading to the deterioration of mutual respect in a society.
In conclusion, competent financial ability and the desire to be better and more unique than others are two causes driving people to purchase in vogue clothes. The decreasing level of mutual respect and the rise in the number of people suffering from financial difficulties as a result of the aforementioned trend can cause more drawbacks which counteract the economic benefits it brings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92931681923 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591715976331 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5427683113 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233176397994 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777548011913 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446343835413 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147210138912 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150004589695 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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