hotel disappointment service

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hotel disappointment service

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my utter disappointment with your hotel and the way your staff is ruining your reputation.
A week ago, my company named ways software, used one of your conference room for executive meeting session. The agenda of the meeting was to obtain modern technological assets and it was joined online by some of our office envoy and agent currently residing in UAE. We were suffered a ton of problems during the meeting. Internet connectivity was one of them. We immediately approached the main office, requesting a redressal of our distress however, the bad-mannered act of manger had shaken my belief in your ability to provide top-notch customer care all the time. He was stick to his point that we paid only for the room, not for cyber facilities. This unprofessional attitude created an unpleasant outlook. Under the given state of affairs abjectly request you to kindly conduct our inquiry in this regard and take the strict step to avoid such unfortunate circumstance in the future.

I hope that you will deal with this matter promptly as it is causing me considerably inconvenienced.

You’re faithfully

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.078125 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94656826494 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708333333333 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2418387124 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0467555981368 0.216113520407 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0132407306403 0.0766984524023 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418708667081 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380302043353 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658702461309 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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