More and more students are going to another country for higher education. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, we have noticed that there are a number of students prefer to studying abroad to studying in their home country. As they need continue their higher education in such foreign universities. But we believe that there will be adavantages and disadvantages while taking decision to continue education outside of the country. So i will illustrate the details as following.
Nowadays , there are a growing number of youngsters choose to study abroad for getting, as they are supported by their parents financially. So they stay there for about four years, it depends on bachelor degree level. Hence, those adults go through this method, as they believe that, there may be more opportunites while they come back to home country. For example, in Dubai, there were enormous number of people get hired who had western degree with excellent salary package and other incentive included to one's package. For this reason, they found that there are more adavantages if they had studied abroad. While companies can also have advantage for employing, students who had studied abroad, they think, that they had more experience compared to people who had local ceritifate. Undeniable, that students who studied outside of the country, that they have been developed well in education sides.
On the contrary, people who had studied abroad, they might create problems in employment process among adults. For example, those who had graduated from local univeristies, they usually encounter low income of monthly pay. As they have few opportunities for getting hired. Consequently, the number of unemployment people would increase daramatically. As they may intend to leave their home country to search for job. Because they feel like, they have been neglected in their country. As a result, one's country will lose numeric skilful workers. Particularly, those who are experienced and well educated. For example, in Sudan, there are a number of human immigrate to gulf countries to look for job, due to limitation of job vacancies in their home country. In consequences, they can not wait to stay without work, as they need to have a source, so that they can rely on it. In addition, they have many liabilities like families and children at their back waiting for a source to live their life naturally.
In brief, in spite of studying abroad will be there more benefits, but it will present obstacles in employment and immigration factor would be increased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'study'?
Suggestion: study
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, look, may, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in brief, as a result, in spite of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71818847372 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5075 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6666232101 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5652173913 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3913043478 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13043478261 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142876106408 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460754997968 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438139760607 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849648102507 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421775272975 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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