It is not a weird phenomenon that students with different races and nationalities sharing the same classroom and taking a mathematic course in a Canadian high school these days. Undoubtedly, millions of youngsters choose to pursue a higher degree of education outside their own countries nowadays. As one of the aboard students in Canada, I believe that it is a wise choice to obtain a foreign study experience during one’s study life.
Understanding a foreign culture and civilization greatly helps to extend one’s knowledge background. In modern labor market, it is very competitive among the graduates of universities or colleges to apply for a premium job. Thus, a candidate with a aboard study background is more attractive to employers. Also, some employers encourage their employees to get inspiration or learn the most advanced technology from foreign countries, for instance, Yun Ma, the CEO of Alibaba, encourages his employees to travel aboard by distribute extra bonus. In such case, an aboard student can quickly adapt into foreign environment and become a fast-learner of those knowledge.
Alternatively, the cost of study in foreign countries is much cheaper nowadays than it is in the past. Some countries such as Saudi Arabia subsidizes their citizen while they staying at foreign countries for study purpose. Another case is that Chinese students who are granted a degree in a foreign country will have a chance to purchase a vehicle without the tax once they returned to their country. Besides, lots of banks or financial institutions offer scholarships and low interest student loans to foreign clients. Under the help of such many policies, more and more students are encouraged to study aboard.
In conclusion, study aboard is truly worthy to considerate for anyone who wants to pursue a higher degree. However, the most crucial problem is how to plan the future’s life. In order to make a meaningful memory of study and a promising future, the best solution is to study in a foreign country.
- more and more students choose to go to another country for their higher education. do u think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it? 95
- Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r a premium job. Thus, a candidate with a aboard study background is more attract...
^
Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: ADDED_BONUS[1]
Message: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply 'bonus'.
Suggestion: bonus
...mployees to travel aboard by distribute extra bonus. In such case, an aboard student can qu...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'those knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; those knowledges
...nvironment and become a fast-learner of those knowledge. Alternatively, the cost of study in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22256097561 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96338797288 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1196939638 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200389933399 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653516451943 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530798256374 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116264128472 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505280847967 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.