More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
As compared to humans, animals have to struggle a lot for their survival. Nowadays a majority of wildlife are disappearing or at a peak of vanish. This essay will discuss a couple of factors that are responsible for this and will provide some solutions to tackle this issue.
Undoubtedly, there are many species which have now eliminated from our ecosystem and a lot are on the urge of extinction. The major factors that resulted in this situation are both natural and manmade. Mainly Pollution is considered one of the main reasons for this condition as the uncertainty in climatic conditions had led to this hazard. for example, fire in the Amazon forest and in the forest of Australia resulted in a great loss of wildlife. Furthermore, not only pollution but overhunting for food and clothing, overpopulation, which indirectly leads to the exploitation of natural habitats to create space for humans are also the main factors for this.
A wide steps needed to be taken by the government for this trouble and More and more sanctuaries and national parks shall be opened in all areas to preserve the species which are about to extinct. There are many steps which can be taken on a personal level also, for instance, Firstly and most importantly, the need for the hour is educating people about endangered species in their respective areas. secondly, a strong boycott of the companies who kill animals for clothing and food. Thirdly, a lot of trees should be planted to maintain our natural vegetation which is home for the wild creatures.
To summarized, wildlife is an important part of our ecosystem and if these will disappear then our entire ecosystem will get disturbed because of it. So, issues that are responsible for this should be wisely eradicated to save our mother planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, as to, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96979865772 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80071906768 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4754046479 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266378797372 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865570914367 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577687383534 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152614177044 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596920153807 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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