More and more young children have mobile phone. Some people say it is a good thing for them, while other say it is a bad thing. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.
People have different views about youngster in terms of using cell phones. while some argue it’s not beneficial in early age, where I believe its good to use in this modern fast-moving generation.
There are various reasons in which people thing it not good to use mobile phone in early age because this might affect their health. For Example, they could affect their eye by continuous staring at mobile screen by this eyesight will be week and they might end up wearing glass at early stage. As a result, its dangerous to use to use smart phones which can later affect their eyes.
On the other hand, I believe use of cell phone can make youngster more advance in the technology skills such as gaming, texting, and social media. For instance, children can know about what is going currently around the world by just simple browsing they are just away by one simple click and have up to date information of everything also it is beneficial for those who are away from their family for foreign studies. Finally, they can easily get in touch through video calling which never give feeling to youngsters that they are away from their parents. Personally, I agree that as more and more technology is used in early stage children get more use to it and can make them equally stand with their age of generation and fight against any problems which block their way.
In conclusion, while it can affect by more usage of it, I believe that better brain development is also equally important with good guidelines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75378787879 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31770828497 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0346254643 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183581122041 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076051440697 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042022401204 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10697921101 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194668766434 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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