More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
Discuss some causes and effects, solutions of this problem.
Obesity is one of the major health issues prevailed among youngsters particularly in those new buds, who are the residents of rich nations. Here, in this essay, I would like to reflect light on the various reasons along with impacts of this happening on the future generation.
There are multifarious reasons behind this concept. First and foremost, lack of physical activity and sedentary lifestyle adoption by the new generation. To be specific, children remain stick to the computer screens and video games instead of going to the playgrounds for their physical fitness. Secondly, eating habits also contributed towards weight gain in upcoming generation. To illustrate, fast foods and ready to eat foods available everywhere in the market easily that has no nutritional value instead of this, cooked with wrong methods of cooking and tastes too good by adding harmful flavours that allured the children by making their mouth watering. As a result, they keep on eating those food stuffs that has nothing healthy in it but unfortunately send invitation to enormous health concerns such as high cholesterol and weight gain.
To embark with the effects of this threat, health of the kids detoriates that inversely effect that country prosperity. Moreover, the capital investment in health sector surge up that cause burden on the government. Certain steps by local authority such as awaring parents and blooming buds regarding benefits of eating healthy balanced diet, encouraging to participate in outdoor activities and launching dietary schemes by government officials is helpful. Consequently, these measures contributed to sort out this issue.
To recapitulate, children are the future of every country although, by providing awareness about healthy dietary pattern and reinforcing the outdoor activities, the problem of obesity easily eradicated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'participating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: participating
...ting healthy balanced diet, encouraging to participate in outdoor activities and launching die...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54035087719 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83166807834 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7540693276 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149205295568 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494525992178 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443043712856 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869740653468 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135395904907 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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