In most parts of the world people are living longer.
What are the possible causes of this situation?
Is this a negative or positive development?
Life time expectancy has increased gradually across the world generally. This essay will discuss the probable causes
of this development and highlight how this has brought a positive change in peoples life.
To begin with, extensive study in the field of medical sciences has made it possible to understand the root causes of
common diseases. As a result, people are aware of these common diseases and vaccinate their children at a young age
against diseases such as polio and hepatitis. Furthermore, research about complex diseases including cancer and
cardiovascular diseases, cure for which was not available resulted in early deaths. Also, with the development of medical
sciences better state of the art facilities are available in health institutes, again increasing the probability to
survive longer. For example, a ventilator can keep a person alive despite failure of his breathing system.
Advancement in medical sciences has contributed positively to the society in general. As humans are probable to survive
longer, it has given a chance for mankind to take advantage of services of talented people. For example, Stephen
Hawking was diagnosed with a deadly disease very earlier in his life but the advancement in medical sciences kept him
alive for several decades. Moreover, he carried out extensive research in the field of astronomy, discovering the
other planets present in our solar system. Therefore, scientists are hopeful for humans to survive in other planets
too and conducting further research to make it possible an alternative place for future generations to live on.
In conclusion, the increase in life time expectancy is a blessing for human kind as they could be benefited by the
services of talented people in the world as well as they are themselves able to live longer.
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| 2019-02-28 | Gohar Khan | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43402777778 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84281289674 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3277673688 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185869942504 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621955893762 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902310295534 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615982646327 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872838842578 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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