Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial.To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development?
We have now entered an age of globalisation.Due to this the pace of development bringing comforts and luxuries in life ,but it also has some undesirable effects. People of metropolitan cities and big towns are agree with benefits of globalisation and others who belongs to rural area are still follow their traditions.
To begin with positive side, improvement in living standard has changed in today’s epoch time.All credits goes to globalisation where we afford such things which are not produced in our country.Using such things we can save our time as well as efforts towards the finishing the task.For instance, citizens of India are using debit card and credit card for shopping and other purposes which can save their times as well as provide safe transactions.This technology arrived from foreign country and its beneficial to all the people who are using it.
On the negative side of globalisation,we forget our traditional skills and trades which are far-famed in world. Nowadays, people are choosing global products over the national and which cost less than national one.It is directly affected to people who are in this business.For example, gold ornaments makers found themselves useless due to gold making instruments arrived and take place in market such that the traditional skills of goldsmith are going to end. Moreover, their traditional trades will shut down in nearby future.
Globalisation is helpful to all the people who wants comfortable life style and who can spend their money for swanky items. Nowadays,global market open in every metropolitan city where we can buy international products or technologies which can save our time as well as efforts.Robots and rail metros are part of this globalisation where two or more than that countries take part in global trades and helpful to other countries for development.
To sum up,Globalisation gives us both merits and demerits in terms of development.It is up to our government and citizens who accept it or denied to use it.But it is always give good impact in industrialisation and commercialisation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2754491018 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23283425585 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571856287425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.580961129 49.4020404114 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.777777778 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1111111111 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176606298903 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716889554945 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325233433645 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967112056654 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397947610469 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.0946893788 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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