Most people are undoubtedly influenced by heavy commercialisation and advertising of products; consumers are buying out of desire more than necessity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, due to the influence of intense commercialization and promotional activities by the companies, people are purchasing products that are more of a desire than their actual need. This essay will express full agreement with this view and offer reasons behind it.
To begin with, most people are compelled to purchase unusual items that hardly belong to their basic need as they are lured by the advertisers. Owing to their clever campaigns, consumers often consider an unnecessary product to be highly essential for their everyday lives. Although the necessity to buy such a lavish item hardly stays in their mind, advertisements can induce them to consider buying it. For example, my mother bought an automatic juice maker a few weeks ago after watching an advert on TV. However, after using it for a few days she realised that the product is actually not useful for home use purpose.
In addition, these days manufacturers often produce multiple variants of a same product that can attract customers to purchase beyond their actual need. Going to super shop, people usually get products that are available in multiple colour, taste and flavour. With an intention to try different variants available, they often purchase in an overwhelming quantity. For example, last year, a toothpaste company named Sensodyne observed nearly 20% increase in their revenue, because they had launched four different flavours of toothpaste although the number of users had hardly increased.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the fact that due to smart promotional activities and introduction of different types of a same product, people nowadays tend to consume beyond their actual necessity and completely out of their desire. This trend is likely to grow in the coming days since marketers would increase their campaigns more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 27, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...creased. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the fact that due to smart promotional activities and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31271477663 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76371138806 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8803083779 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126767074043 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485983140074 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447071131173 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935822871395 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548969730271 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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