most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?
The belief of most individuals is to implement stricter punishment for traffic violation. I agree on the same, however the punishment shouldn't be restricted to the people violating them but also to the people who benefit from violating them.
In my opinion, punishments for traffic violation are restricted to spot fines and nothing more than that. Whereas with great thought it is evident that the officers protecting the traffic rules make good use of fine collection for their personal errands and make ends meet for them on a daily basis. With this being the scenario it is essential to implement set rules for both the punisher and the criminal.
The rules executed should be fierce, and send a shiver down the spine to every individual. It should give them a second thought before they think of committing the crime. This would result in reducing the crime rates of bribery and the accident rates caused by traffic violation.
In conclusion, I agree that severe punishments should be executed in order to produce a sense of discipline and decorum. The set punishments should be a lesson well-learnt and invoke fear to the onlookers too. This would create a feeling of hesitation before they violate any traffic rules. The path to decorum and discipline from avoid traffic offences can be a stupendous stepping stone to the betterment of the country. We don't just become disciplined but also save lives that are being lost everyday. The accomplishment and satisfaction derived from making rules hard and fast can take sometime to fall in line but it can be an achievement worth remembering down the memory lane. Punishments inculcated don't just benefit the country but also every individual who strives to make the world a better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, second, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01718213058 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71614215951 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2840422873 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270691183622 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939894403587 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652802018217 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170032514573 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069271759468 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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