Some people believe that its not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience
There has been a massive development in the field of technology. There are some individuals who are of the opinion that the internet access is not essential to lead a full life. In my opinion, internet is considered to be vital in order to lead a life with comfort and to accelerate the success pace.
In our daily office routine activities, there are many communications that are essential in order to complete various tasks. These communications are done by emails which require internet access. Internet helps the company to crack many international business deals without visiting the customer’s country. For example, e-commerce platform helps the buyers and the sellers to do trade at a faster pace without international commutation. Hence, internet access has now become a part of an individual’s daily life.
Moreover, internet is now considered as one of the most important requirement in the education industries. Many researches and academic projects are done based on the references available online. In addition to this, the traditional teaching techniques are now replaced by computerized teaching methods. For instance, in many schools and colleges, the student are encourage to do academic activities online instead of doing in the notebooks. Therefore, internet access is imperative for the students in order to gain more knowledge and to excel in their studies.
To conclude, internet access is essential to satisfy the people’s basic and routine requirements. Thus, the access to internet is considered as a basic requirement in various field such as business, offices and schools. Therefore, in order to lead a life to its fullest and to achieve success in the competitive market, internet access is a must.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 365, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...y schools and colleges, the student are encourage to do academic activities online instea...
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Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...and colleges, the student are encourage to do academic activities online instead of d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18187844099 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9753389424 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15909802581 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056603313298 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555462004049 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107192070904 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417863122761 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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