Most people consider money to be important for achieving happiness
How important is money for happiness?
Many people believe that money is essential to happiness. I am of the opinion that money brings temporary happiness which later on turned into sadness.
Firstly, the happiness people relate to money is not long lasting. Buying material things are mostly considered as an achievement which will make people joyful. But in reality, it only lasts a few days and after that, any material thing becomes insignificant. For instance, people who buy Ferrari would feel like the happiest person on the earth and after some months that happiness is on its lowest level and Ferrari becomes a normal vehicle for him to go from place A to place B.
Secondly, instead of happiness, money brings sadness. Most people spend their whole life earning money to fulfill their dreams such as buying their own house or a fancy automobile. While running after the money they forget to enjoy their life and live in the moment. Then on getting their dream, they realize that this was not the happiness and satisfaction they were looking for and regret on wasting all this time for a material thing. This will make them sad as this time cannot be reversed.
Lastly, in reality, happiness comes from immaterial things. Happiness is when children make their parents proud in front of everyone. Happiness is helping a homeless man with food and a warm place. These are few examples of a joyful time which not only lasts forever but it also brings satisfaction which one cannot experience with spending money.
In conclusion, While money is necessary to live but it cannot be a source of happiness as it is hidden in immaterial things which we do for others and not in buying expensive material possessions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...hey forget to enjoy their life and live in the moment. Then on getting their dream, they real...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88850174216 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50154804018 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7685655104 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309861374325 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100200021603 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596191407279 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176826522418 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469924870656 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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