In this contemporary era, the majority of people do not focus on the atmosphere problems even not doing anything to save environment. I agree with this notion and this essay will highlight the valid reasons to substantiate the same in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with views of disagreement that numerous individual s are active to save biosphere. In other words, there a various NGOs which are doing work to tackle the environment issues. They plant more tress and make laws against deforestation. As a result, it is good for future generation to live in fresh air.
Shifting towards view of agreement, nowadays people are interested in living sedentary lifestyle. To explicate it, they only focus on their work and earn handsome money. Moreover, they do not worry about nature and their problems they are busy in their own lives. To epitome, a survey was conducted by Mumbai University in 2019 has revealed that if these problems increase then it effects adverse on humans.As a consequence, people will face many health problems and will no live longer.
Further strengthening view due to which humankind makes enough money from these. To explain it, most of the persons plant tress to earn hefty money due to which they destroy the nature.To exemplify, it had written in the newspaper that around 200 trees was cut in last 2 years. Therefore, it effects the natural disasters and through this people will face enormous problems.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that people do not give attention to save environment problems which become big issues for human beings in the future.However, there are a number of companies those who work for the betterment of the ecosystem.
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- Obesity was once considered a disease of adults however it is becoming increasingly common among children Why do you think this is happening What can be dome to help children stay healthy 78
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can beneficial for teenagers and the community as well Do you agree or disagree 76
- The bar chart below shows about the average children born per woman in 5 countries in 1970 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09318996416 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82566424269 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605734767025 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4776354022 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207326616223 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637344283589 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659706947956 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115385439902 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819952336977 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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