Most people do not care enough about environmental issues To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

One of the most topical issues in modern society is environmental. It has been suggested that most people do not care enough about environmental issues. I partially agree with this statement for reasons I will outline below.

From an overall perspective, there are two main reason why people do not care enough about environment. From a society point of view people do not give environment much thought is because at the moment it does not affect in their daily life. A good illustration of this is that they cannot see the how global warming or pollution is destroying the environment. It is only when crisis occur, such as flooding, that people start to consider the reasons behind it. However, they are soon forgotten and the situation once again ignored. From a practical point of view people do not know enough about environmental issues. Most people have heard about global warming or pollution, but they are not really understand the implications of them. If they understood, they would use less car to move or try all cost to save resource more.

Despite with these argument, there are also reasons to disagree with this statement that many people are also much care about environmental issues. More and more people are try applying many environmental protection solutions in their life, such as plant more trees or reduce use of plastic bags, use natural material.

In conclusion, it must be said that statement has become a complex issue with no easy solution. Overall I would have to say that I agree strongly with this idea that people do not care enough about environment issues. If they do not care enough about environmental issues, their life will be destroyed, both socially and practically

Votes
Average: 7.8 (61 votes)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99305555556 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71003997155 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3546182305 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490799622117 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172511719381 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153765558555 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340743279276 0.151304729494 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962552625249 0.056905535591 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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