Most people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food now. Do you think this has more advantages or more disadvantages.
The hotel and restaurant sector has expanded drastically in recent times. The contemporary society enjoys eating out more than preparing the meal at home. According to me, the demerits of buying meals far weigh its benefits.
On the positive side, the only reason to opt readily cooked food is convenience. To many, the foodstuffs available in restaurants may seem to be an easy option to satisfy their hunger; undoubtedly, many would not bother to get ingredients from different shops and wasting time in cooking three meals a day. Definitely, getting instant options in restaurant would prove easy, where they just pay for the food without thinking of recipe items or cleaning dishes after eating. The restaurant culture has definitely served as boon for such people.
However, there is downside to this. A problem is that outside food mainly focuses on taste and not quality of ingredients. They may get cheap ingredients and may use taste enhancers which would affect health of people consuming them. Moreover, majority of restaurants would have menu that includes fast food; which when over consumed leads to several diseases like increase in cholesterol levels. Unequivocally, nothing is more beneficial than good health which is why outside food is never a good option if compared with homemade. Secondly, the outside food is much costlier than the one cooked at home and is not affordable to all classes of people. The poor people could never think to buy it as they may cook 10 people food at cost of 1 person's food at restaurant. Further to this, it has been observed at certain restaurant owners keep using the items such as sausages, meat and poultry even if it has crossed the expiry date; which invariably has harmful effect on person's overall health.
Thus, I pen down saying that although great at taste and easily available, the homemade food is always the better choice to keep up good health, and because it is economical. The outside food has many demerits that includes health compromise and expensive rates. As nothing is beneficial if health of a person is in danger; so, in my opinion the merits of home cooked food outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01377410468 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63716520482 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592286501377 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4508294136 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247948349423 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769026221076 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595182284723 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135371053463 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556152223882 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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