In this up-to-date hectic lifestyle people are fascinated for feeding stomach by readymade food. Keeping the harmful effect of it in mind, mainly I am disagreed with the trend. But I also know that it quick inexpensive and effortless food in our busy lifestyle. So, I will explain my views on base of it.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why readymade foods are not suitable for human body. Firstly, readymade foods contain high level of preservative which leading various kinds of disease like cancer, heart problem, kidney trouble. For example, UAE well-known newspaper 'Gulf News' published the level of preservative in pocket food for increasing awareness of nation in 2012. Moreover, if it is junk food than it will be more dangerous for us. Cause one side it is lack of nutrition. Other side containing high calories and sugar. Meanwhile, it leading diabetes, obesity. To highlight, nowadays one third of people all over the world suffering obesity because of pocket food. They have to spend lot of money for treatment even it can be reason of death. Therefore, readymade foods are inappropriate for our health and waste of money too.
Nevertheless, in regular consumption readymade food help us to save our time in our busy life. Specially, if both parents are working in that case it plays a beneficial roll. Moreover, it is effortless that homemade food. In addition, it is inexpensive tasty food and we can get is easily.
In conclusion, health is wealth. So, we should not compromise with it. As we cannot stop buying or selling of readymade food, but we should be aware about the negative effect of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, third, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99272727273 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72945367342 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614545454545 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6352511551 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.380952381 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0952380952 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182397568505 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538776719037 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605189761049 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103823250982 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421288119105 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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