There are lots of people who watch movies or TV program in their free time. They watch crime films and criminal TV program because they are entertained when they watch it. In this essay, I will discuss why they enjoy this viewing this kind of movies and the disadvantages of it.
Firstly, the people who make these movies (Script writers/Fiction writers)attract people by writing exciting text, sequence of events, and great photo quality. Some of them are real stories so, some people will watch them to learn how to defend themselves.Criminal movies are blockbusters nowadays as compered with/ to other kinds of movies.
In addition, in my opinion, some people like this type of films because of what they see in their daily lives. Nowadays, we see that their are lots of problems between countries. Every country wants to dominate the other.For example, the American Hollywood, which is the top-notch film industry in the world will do everything possible to remain the envy of all box office images. So I think that people tend to watch this type of movies as a catharsis and comical relief to move away from real-life thinking.
However, these types of movies are harmful to human life especially children because they do not know if this is a good thing or not. Some children get affected quickly and have no personality, so they imitate anything they like. We see now a lot of crimes because this is the first reason for this.
Furthermore, lack of confidence in a person's life because of self doubt may also affect everything in hid life. Studies has shown that the number of divorces has increased over time and one of the reasons was the lack of confidence resulting from watching these films.
In conclusion, i think people who make the film must be discourage from churning this kind of films and start to make films like comedy to change our feeling when we watch it. secondly, the government and family must censor criminal and horror movies and encourage them to watch educational, documentaries, features, informative ,news and comedy films.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.665625 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47248728194 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51875 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7533213499 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307559537536 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1065966954 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799080097173 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158424805858 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864873780332 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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