Most people think that the truth should be objective than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?
Over the few decades, advertising play a crucial role in the citizen. Some are of opinion that when the real informations are inserted in mass media , it is more objective than subjective. In my standpoint, the part of article in social media is really subtle. However, it is believed the effective method to reach out informations quickly for everyone.
There is such a thing as a defect in a story of newspapers for different purposes. Firstly, some newspaper offices make a name for themselves by giving false or misleading information to society in order to receive public attention. A person, for instance, can be easily drawn into a tabloid newspaper by him natural curiosity. Secondly, sensation-seeking newspapers which magnify a trifling incident have more profitable than quality newspapers. For example, to hire from civilian the faults of somebody, the journalist can be paid a lot of money for unrealistic informations.
On the one hand, the truth can not be debated is press bring a large amount of benefits to the society. From my presentation, reading or watching news becomes one of the most essential activity. Most of people, for instance, update the forecast new in the mass media. Moreover, that is the best way to take easily the social information such as price of fuels, education, political rights, sports and so on. Thanks to this, our knowledge can be expanded and faster access to news sources around the world to avoid being backward.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons from publishing the yellow journalism in some newspaper office. Beside, I would argue that the benefits of newspaper in human daily life.
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| 2019-11-14 | kamal_rose96@yahoo.com | 56 | view |
| 2019-11-14 | kamal_rose96@yahoo.com | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-14 | kamal_rose96@yahoo.com | 56 | view |
| 2018-09-19 | Sarena Nguyen | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... informations are inserted in mass media , it is more objective than subjective. I...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...mes one of the most essential activity. Most of people, for instance, update the forecast new ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04727272727 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93528355002 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1119369026 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.75 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143116357207 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422473039368 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350554386769 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757003766493 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339565834371 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.