In most succesful companies, some people think that communication betwen employers and workers is the most important factor. other people say that other factor are more important.
In this believe that in most successful companies some people think that communication between employers and workers is the most important factor In this essay i completely agree this statement for some reason.
In the one hand, there are some reason of people think commucation between employers and workers is the most important factor, firstly commucation is the main step to grow a business. it is due to people will be interested If the commucation is good, for example, currently a lot of companies developing because they have good commucations so that people will be more confident to choose that company. Secondly case good comunication can help increase the customers, it is becuase customers will be happy if served with good communication, for example when company Offered some product with good served people will be interest and confident, as result the company will be grow up fast and get a lot of profit.
However, there are some drowback in this problem first of all, firstly, people can not just use communcation for business, because mary another factor which can helped company to getting a lot of customers, as on example the electronic company, for grow up business they should to use more than one factor like a good service, have complete tools and timely and fast service, as result customer will be interent to visit again, secondly hard to competitive with other company, it is because the company not have another alternative, just use factor communication, for example in Indonesia a lot of company bankrupt because they do not have good strategy nevertheless the company will be hard to grow if they do not have difference.
To sum up, it is true that good commucation can be helped company to grow up, however I want to give suggestion for another company to do not just use good commucation in their business but there are many alternatives to grow up
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
In this believe that in most successful companies some ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...on is the main step to grow a business. it is due to people will be interested If ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91849529781 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78756192203 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438871473354 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.922904743 49.4020404114 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.5 106.682146367 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.1666666667 20.7667163134 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6666666667 7.06120827912 279% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260215411849 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173392095112 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134588488562 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187920946601 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129489939224 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 13.0946893788 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
In this believe that in most successful companies some ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...on is the main step to grow a business. it is due to people will be interested If ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91849529781 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78756192203 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438871473354 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.922904743 49.4020404114 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.5 106.682146367 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.1666666667 20.7667163134 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6666666667 7.06120827912 279% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260215411849 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173392095112 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134588488562 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187920946601 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129489939224 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 13.0946893788 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.