Multi-cultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic people, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the passage of time, there is a progressive increase in the migration of people from one country to another. Hence, people belonging to various ethnicity, religions and castes, amalgamate to form a multi-cultural society. I strongly believe that multi-cultural formations lead to prosperity and growth of a nation, and hence this essay will discuss my views supporting it.
It shall be acknowledged that there are various drawbacks in a society when people from different nations stay together. Migrants, especially, find it difficult to adjust and adapt to the culture of other ethnic groups. People from overseas try to maintain their culture in a new country and thereby create problems to the local residents. In certain cases, this results into clashes amongst different ethnic groups. For example, celebration of certain festival and performing certain rituals by immigrants may not be acceptable to the local community. Although the drawbacks and disadvantages of multi-cultural societies are quite notable, the fact that such societies bring in various advantages in long run cannot be ignored.
Multi-cultural society brings in a wide variety of advantages to a nation, such as economic boost in terms of Gross Domestic Product, enhances trade and commerce, educational opportunities, growth in employment opportunity, etc., to name a few. Perhaps, countries like USA, Canada and Australia, which allow immigrants to migrate to either study or settle on a permanent basis, are the best examples. These countries today are well-known for their multi-cultural environment. People from different ethnicity and religion, enjoy working together. They feel content and enjoy the company of other ethnic group. Multi-cultural societies also lead to a sense of equality with a unique diversity touch.
While multi-cultural societies bring in noticeable drawbacks to a nation, the significant amount of advantages outweigh those in my opinion. Hence, in present scenario, most of the nations are making effort to invite immigrants to settle in their nation on a permanent basis. I strongly agree to the fact that multi-cultural societies not only lead to economic boost of a nation, but also results into better social cohesiveness among people of different ethnicity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54727793696 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12180247494 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54441260745 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5012209848 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182149664987 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616528915148 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373695066291 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117211795145 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277567347808 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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