Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this
Undoubtedly, there is escalating count of transnational companies which are preferring to incorporate their subsidiaries in emerging nations. Even though invasive increase in multinational firms has uplifted the lifestyles of underprivileged countries by eradicating their misfortunes, still their insane money driven approach constantly proliferating the carbon footprints and deteriorating the environment of poor countries.
On the bright side, the multinational enterprises have brought the dawn of industrialization in less developed nations and alleviated the countless plights of commoners. Seemingly, these transnational firms have profound know-how which leads to the mass commercialization and endow the high employment opportunities. Consequently, high earnings guarantee the elegant lifestyle and erode the chronic hassles such as poverty and malnutrition. Also, it is overlook the fact documented by WHO that economic reforms favoring the foreign companies have paved the path of luminous future of Indian and curb the unemployment rate. Therefore, how to earn handsome amount of money with dignity is taught by multinational organisations.
On the other side, these transnational undertakings are not heeding towards the contamination of environment. In order to earn exorbitant gains, these undertaking are exploiting the natural resources at large scale. Unfortunately, turmoil political conditions and lack of stringent environmental rules are provoking the multinational undertakings to take those steps which are not eco-friendly. To exemplify, as per the survey conducted by American Pollution Council, in the gone calendar year, that spurt in the number of multinational firms in India has proliferated the carbon emission up to danger level. Henceforth, these organisations is ignoring the importance of sustainable development and soon, convert developing countries into non-inhabitant places.
In conclusion, although with the introduction of multinational firms the employ ability has been risen, the atmospheric degradation by intensify the carbon bar cannot be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, look, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22260273973 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63269972864 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640410958904 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5507116079 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.769230769 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139783521175 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420017086742 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380812309682 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748418644966 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243010988784 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.09 12.4159519038 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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