Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works of art, and not show the culture or artworks from other countries. To what extent you agree or disagree?

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Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works of art, and not show the culture or artworks from other countries. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Display of artistry creation by a foreign nation has become a controversial issue in the past few years as many people believe that the museums and art galleries must pay attention to domestic art work but some other possesses opposite views. In my opinion we must not put limitation on artistic creativity even if they are from other countries.

In the past 1 decade, the art work has played a significant role to strengthen the relationship among different nations. it has helped people to know each others culture and traditions, for example, a huge number of tourists visit to madame tussads, in England which depicts the images of Indian celebrities.
Beside the cross country communication, art work is helpful to share the vital knowledge about a other regions of the globe. discrimination on the basis of region is not only harmful for the global artists but also have a worse impact on the learning of domestic artists. A recent study has indicated that art work not only bring people together but also helpful in employment generation.

On the other hand, i believe that the government should put restriction on some foreign content which are not acceptable from the society point of view, for instance, a showcase of a girl image without clothes is a common thing in western countries but it can be seen as offensive in asian region.

In conclusion, we must not restrict the expression of art and they must be allowed to show there imagination in all parts of world, however the acts, which can hurt the sentiments of host country , ought to control by rules and regulations.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92619926199 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77341157117 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59778597786 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8439981985 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.333333333 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23182548359 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905333717811 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516368342535 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114605514319 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564173983541 0.056905535591 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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