n Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In some countries like Britain, when some people get older they move to an old age home to live with people of the same kind, with better medical facilities. In certain circumstances, the government pays for this care, while in other situations the family bears the cost for this facility. I am of a balanced opinion. In some cases, countries could contribute and in other cases children could also provide for their parent’s upkeep.
To embark upon, In Many Asian countries where the economy is not developed in comparison to countries like the USA, the old-age care facilities can't be borne by the government due to many financial constraints. Families, therefore, let their grandparents or old parents live with them, so their health and well-being can be taken care by the family themselves. While the cost for the same is borne by family. Another thing to be considered is that, when many basic issues related to population, infrastricture, education, of these developing or underdeveloped countries are still to be taken care of, in the face of these serious problems the government will find it difficult to provide financial assistance for aged people. In very rare occasions for example like. the Indian government provides financial aid to aging people who have worked for the government, even in these cases the frugal pension given to them does not cover the medical expenses. Therefore, the major cost is still borne by the members of their family.
Secondly, there are many developed countries like the UK and France where old age care facilities are provided by the government itself. One of the main reasons for the same is that the government has a lot of surplus funds after attending to the basic needs of its citizens. Also, the medical facilities in these countries are well organized and rightly equipped that it can facilitate options like old age care homes, childcare etc. Take forinstance, In Scandinavian, countries like Norway, the Government provides, homes for the aged equipped with proper health care services in a friendly and a blissful atmosphere. Hence, it is considered number one country for senior citizens to stay in.
To conclude with, the old age care facility should be provided by the government in developed countries, whereas, in developing or underdeveloped countries the cost should be borne by the families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, another thing, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11597938144 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85857508835 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497422680412 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7687886945 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.764705882 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8235294118 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328805607015 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108404350137 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805515348707 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21970124354 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736291527697 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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