The natural resources such as oil and forest are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?
No one can deny the fact that some of the exhaustible resources are being over-utilized by humans, due to which those resources are on verge of extinction. This essay will explicate the major consequences of this such as climate change and extinction of important species alongwith solutions.
To begin with, one of the biggest problem which can arise from overconsumption of natural resources is changing climatic pattrens. In other words, non-renewable resources of energy such as oil cause air pollution because burning of such fossil fuels emits pestiforous gases, owning to which quality of air deteriorates. To exemplify, petrol and diesel used in automobiles release greenhouse gases which is leading to catastrophic efforts like global warming. Moreover, these resources are present in limited amount in nature and their overwage can lead to their disappearence. To tackle this, individuals should run their vehicles on natural gas CNG instead of petrol and diesel because it is eco-friendly and ownership of cars should also be restricted by legal authorities to limit the use of oil.
The another major obstacle caused by this, declining number of specific species of plants and animals cannot be overlooked. To explain it, human beings are exploting forests for their luxurious lifestyle which destroys the habitat of many organisms. As they do not have any shelter, animals and birds have lost their lives. For instance, passenger pigeons became extinct due to habitant loss. To cape with this, government should do strict monitoring of logging activity and plantation of these should be encouraged. It will lead to preservance of forests and species.
To conclude, exploitation of natural resources has major grave repercussions like as hostile environmental conditions and disappearance of important species. It should be controlled by the joint action of government and individuals. If these problems are left unattended, then situations will become more worse in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, then, for instance, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37337662338 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93133274663 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 308.0 20.2975951904 1517% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1655.0 106.682146367 1551% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 308.0 20.7667163134 1483% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 88.0 7.06120827912 1246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213003511286 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213003511286 0.084324248473 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123411163589 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405162186565 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 157.9 13.0946893788 1206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -249.6 50.2224549098 -497% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 124.6 11.3001002004 1103% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.35 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.73 8.58950901804 276% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 125.2 10.1190380762 1237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 125.0 10.7795591182 1160% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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