Being parents is known as the greatest responsibility in the lifetime of each individual. This is because parenting revolves around ensuring physical, emotional, and social aspects of the child are well taken care of. That is why some believe that participating in professional courses to learn how to bring up children is essential. I wholeheartedly agree with this view.
To begin, some argue that parenting is the instinct occurring since the baby is born. Therefore, new fathers and mothers do not need to attend such useless courses and they could ask for advice from the elder instead. However, raising babies in the past is somewhat different from that in the present. In particular, the old parenting methods are mainly based on violent discipline in order to ensure that their kids will develop to the model their parents want. Nevertheless, some scientific evidence points out that such an upbringing environment would have negative impacts on children’s development, especially on their psychological aspect and their academic performance.
This is the reason for the significance of the parenting classes. First, these classes provide new fathers and mothers with appropriate knowledge and skills to deal with their children’s behavior crisis. Moreover, parents would be prepared with first-aid knowledge for emergency situations such as when kids are choking or having breathing issues. Lastly, some mothers may suffer from postpartum depression due to hormonal changes and sleep deprivation. For this reason, parenting classes would connect people who are in this situation as well as give them appropriate consultation to overcome this difficult time.
In conclusion, when considering on positive influences of parenting courses, including facilitating an ideal nurturing environment for kids and providing precious information, I believe that these classes are vitally necessary for young parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63103448276 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00539546524 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7872038366 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269783564806 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083501561261 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575649135231 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153820204832 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804778703025 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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