News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to write innewspapers. What factors influence these decisions? Do you think webecome used to bad news? Should more good news be reported?

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to write in
newspapers. What factors influence these decisions? Do you think we
become used to bad news? Should more good news be reported?

Submitted by sahanamd on Thu, 07/18/2019 - 16:24

News editors have challenging decisions to make when deciding what to
publish because they must consider the interests of many competing factors.
The primary consideration for editors is the interests of their employers, or the
government if they play a significant role in determining the future of media
outlets. If owners have no particular interest in a story, editors will often
choose to publish many negative stories as they often contain warnings for the
general public, but this should be balanced with positive stories to avoid
pessimism and cynicism in society. In this essay the role of the media will be
discussed.
Editors are employees and although they make decisions about what is to be
published, they make those decisions with the interests of their owners in mind.
Media organisations often take a political stance and will favour one political
party over another to reflect the interests of the owner. In this way the media
influences political debate and are therefore very powerful. This situation is
both undesirable and unavoidable but the overall impact of individual media
organisations has become less because of the wide availability of different
information sources on the Internet.
If there is little political gain in a story then editors will generally choose to
publish more negative than positive stories in the media because these stories
often serve as warnings to the general public. For example, stories of children
dying because of being left in cars on hot days and people charged with serious
offences such as drug trafficking in other countries are useful reminders to the
population of the serious consequences of these actions.
However, it is important to balance negative articles with more positive articles
to avoid people becoming depressed and cynical and to remind people of the
goodness that exists in almost everyone. Stories of people rescuing others or
providing support to the ill and underprivileged are important in reminding us
of the many positive things that we do for others and are done for us each day.
In summary, news editors represent the owners of media organisations and will
make decisions in their best interest. Where there is little or no interest they
will usually report more negative stories as these serve as warnings to the
public, but balance these with positive ones to remind us of the goodness we
all possess.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in summary, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29487179487 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74764737092 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.405863558 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.5 106.682146367 138% => OK
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Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589434875716 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590869721218 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412254888671 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677459913199 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
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dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
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linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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